古い商品説明例
【Product features】
This UV lotion can strongly protect "ultraviolet rays" and "environmental stress" from the outside, and can provide aging care by keeping the inside skin moisturized. In addition to the high sunscreen effect of SPF50 and PA ++++, it has also achieved a comfortable adhesion to the skin and resistance to collapse. It is a non-chemical product that does not use UV absorbers without burdening the skin, so it is recommended for people with sensitive skin. Besides, it contains a lot of beauty ingredients such as arch choke leaf extract, which improves wrinkles and blemishes, prevents dry skin, whitening effect by suppressing the growth of melanocytes that darken the skin, and reduce the damage that influenced by UV ray. Plamine perfect lotion can be used throughout the whole year, not just during the hot season.
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このコピーは不自然に聞こえ、翻訳が不十分な英語で書かれており、インパクトに欠け、読者との信頼関係が十分に構築されていないため、アジアの知られていないブランドを取り扱うアジアのストアで、購入されるチャンスはほぼ無いでしょう。
また「美白効果」の概念は日本やアジアでは依然として強いのですが、アメリカ、カナダ、ヨーロッパのような多文化社会では、人種的および階級差別的な理由と、どのような用語でどのように販売されるかという理由で、非常に問題になる可能性があり注意が必要です。白人の肌は元々白い事を理解しておく必要があり、白い肌を目指すべきかのように黒人へ訴求してしまうことは、差別と捉えられるリスクがあります。
新しい商品説明例
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The best SPF lotions offer hydration—and anti-aging properties. Perfected in Japan, this sunscreen is advanced skincare with UVA and UVB protection.
What It Is
Next level sun protection from Japan, this is sunscreen perfected. SPF 50 protects skin from UVA and UVB rays while a unique formula delivers anti-aging and moisturizing benefits.
Helps With
Lightweight in texture, this barely-there SPF lotion absorbs seamlessly into the skin while active ingredients deliver the benefits of scientific skincare. Ideal to wear daily or under makeup, SPF 50 protects from both UVA and UVB rays and prevents photo-aging. Meanwhile, this unique formula from Japan helps to reduce fine lines, brighten the skin, and hydrate dull complexions.
Ideal for sensitive skin and good for all skin types, Rose Myrtle Fruit Extract naturally prevents sun damage and photo aging as Artichoke Leaf Extract gently reduces wrinkles and brightens the skin. Shea Butter locks in moisture and delivers anti-inflammatory properties to soothe overexposed skin. Aging skin will benefit from Rice Germ Oil and its high dose of antioxidants.
Recommended For
All Skin Types, Sensitive Skin
More Details
Made in Japan. Paraben, ethanol and mineral oil-free. Contains no artificial coloring or fragrance. Size: 40ml